We encounter change all the time; in our lives, in our bodies, in our minds; within our families, our societies, our community churches and even within our schools. So, not only change cannot be stopped but whenever changes occurred there is always a consequence. Our lives change as we migrate from one country to another. Another consequence is the bodily looks that we desire on television and magazines have a possibility of creating eating disorder. Another is the way we think, it changes by the day as we absorb more information, so, how do we deal with ‘changes’?
The word ‘change’ can mean a lot of things including what has been mention above but in this essay, the word ‘change’ refers to the moving from the print era to the electronic future. This essay will be an attempt to compare and contrast two articles in term of the issue of ‘changes’. I will compare and contrast the style used and also the point of views express in the two articles. In doing so, I am hoping that it will give some kind of light to the question of this essay.
The first article is by Sven Birkerts called “Into the Electronic Millennium,” taken from an edited book named Writing Materials: Readings from Plato to the Digital Age edited by Evelyn B. Tribble and Anne Trubek. Birkerts argues that
‘change is upon us – nothing could be clearer. The printed word is part of a vestigial order that we are moving away from – by choice and by societal compulsion ... This shift is happening throughout our culture, away from the patterns and habits of the printed page and toward a new world distinguished by its reliance on electronic communications.’[1]Birkerts went on to describe the evidence of these changes but stating that these changes are not so recognizable in the sense that the disk drives hooked to modems, transmissions linked to technologies of reception, recording, duplication, and storage. There is also the number and codes and frequencies, button and signals yet why hasn’t somebody stepped forward to explain what is going on?
[2] On the other hand, to get the enormity of the changes happening around there is a need to compare today to the past. As the time goes by, more people are turning to the computer instead of the daily newspaper, trees and rocks have receded, distance and time is no longer a problem, and that was then this is now. For the time being, we cannot determine ourselves where we stand in terms of the print era and the electronic era because we are still in the process of that movement. We do have modern technologies now but people cannot seem to let go of their books. The truth is that we are living in the time of overlap where the changes around push us one way yet we cannot seem to let go of the past and the print era.
The print order is linear and logical by means of the syntax. Here, Birkerts defines syntax as ‘the substructure of discourse, a mapping of the ways that the mind makes sense through language.’
[3] The syntax requires active reading and focus of the reader in order to make meaning of it and we engage with it in private. The print material is fixed and cannot be change by the writer or the reader once it’s printed. Materials are layered upon layered to maintain active reading and to sustain focus.
The electronic order on the other hand is quiet the opposite. The engagement with information and content is relatively public because of the nature of the web. The material is not fixed anymore and it can be easily cut and paste to suit the need of the reader. ‘If the print medium exalts the word, fixing it into permanence, the electronic counterpart reduces it to a signal, a means to an end.’
[4] In the end, Birkerts concluded that ‘no one can really predict how we will adapt to the transformations taking place all around us.’
[5]The second article is by Howard Rheingold called “Look Who’s Talking.” This article is taken from the same book as Sven Birkerts’ article was. Given Rheingold’s background as a person who loves his technology, he sets out to investigate how technology affects him as a person. He turned to a community which has separated themselves from the rest of the world, The Amish communities. As first it seems that what is heard outside of the Amish community is right but as Rheingold found that it is more to it then just separating themselves from the world of technology. Horse-drawn machinery, homemade clothing and live in houses which lack basic modern necessity like electricity are some of the things the Amish community differ from the ‘world of technology.’
On the other hand, we can also found consumer technologies like disposable diapers, in-line skates and gas barbecue grills which illustrate that there is a system in the Amish community that allows them which technology they can use. One of the controversy in this system is the discussion of the telephones, as Rheingold’s guide said, “whenever you see an Amish woman sitting in the field like that (a woman sitting a hundred yards from her house holding her hand up to her ear), she’s probably talking on a cell phone.”
[6] The controversy has force one-fifth of the Amish church members to break away and certain Amish communities have accepted telephone for the reason of emergency calling, however, they too did not allow the phones in their home. Instead, they made it a communal where a neighborhood of two or three will share a telephone house in a wooden shanty. This is because Amish community does not want to interrupt a conversation at home by answering the phone so they put the phone outside.
Rheingold also found out that it is all about control, Amish community wants to be in control, they do not want the technology to control them. While talk to Amos (one of the Amish) about electricity Rheingold asks Amos why not use the public electricity instead of diesel generator and 12 volt battery. Amos reply by stating that by connecting to public electricity it is uncontrollable, sooner or later, radio, television will be plugged but by having a generator and a battery we can control the use of electricity. In the end, Rheingold concluded that the ‘Amish provide a precise philosophical yardsticks that could guide the use of technological power … If we decided that community came first, how would we use our tools differently?’
[7]These two articles both have different styles. Style here, is refer to how the author structure his article and his argument not only that but style also refer to the language that each individual author used. Birkerts structures his article according to a scientific format where he states his thesis then he gives evidence to support his thesis. After he illustrates these evidences he then states the development that we need to look out for as we move from one era to the other. This particular style suits Birkerts’ purpose, which is to illustrate that change, is here and not in the future to come and it also brings out his point of view clearly and it is arrange in a logical format that you get a linear systematic argument.
This is different to Rheingold. Rheingold is not putting out his point of view. He is not building up an argument. He is looking for an answer to his question, what kind of person am I? So, he sets out his article to give evidence from his research that he conducted at the Amish community. Rheingold talks about his research and then draw his conclusion on his research, and which change his approach and used of technology to limit the control of technology over him. But again, as he has to come to a conclusion and shown some light on the questions that he started out with he concluded with another question, ‘If we decided that community came first, how would we use our tools differently?’ Therefore, we can see that both authors have used a particular style that contributes to bringing forth their individual point of views and delivered their purposes.
In addition, the language used in these two articles is different to some extend. Although they can be similar in their used formal languages and their used of the personal pronoun ‘I’, majority of these two articles are different to one another because of the nature of both articles. For example, Birkerts’ structure by providing a thesis and then illustrate evidence, the language is formal, it shows by this quote, ‘To underscore my point, I have been making it sound as if we were all abruptly walking out of one room and into another, …’
[8] He is summing up his thesis to indicate that he will now turn to give evidence for his thesis. Not only that the language is formal, the structure is formal too.
Rheingold, on the other hand, uses a lot of informal language. This is, however, suit his structure and nature of his article. For the reason that he is explain his research and drawing out his conclusion from his research it is reasonable for him to informal language like the majority used of the word ‘I’, the used of the speech quotes for example, ‘Moses said, “it wasn’t accepted to have telephone in the building, even in a business.”’
[9]As I have mentioned before, the style of the article depends on what the purpose fot eh author and his/her point of view. Indeed, both Birkerts and Rheingold have similar views about technology but different experience. They are both cautious of the impact of technology, Birkerts warns the reader by illustrating developments like language erosion, flattening of historical perspectives and the waning of private self, that we need to look out for as ‘our proto-electronic era yields to an all-electronic future.’
[10] Rheingold on the other hand base his whole article in finding ways that we should not let technology take control of us and one of the ways he found out to do that is to limit the technological appliances at home.
In conclusion, in comparing and contrasting these two articles I have come to realize that they have shine the light on my question, how do we deal with change? I think that there is not a definite answer to this question as Birkerts have illustrated. I also think that if we do come up with an answer to this question, it will only raise another question as Rheingold have illustrated. However, it does not mean that we should stop looking for an answer. We need to learn to adapt to the changes happening around us. This is because the changes around us will change our perspectives, our lives, but also how we live. Therefore, the question still stand, how can we deal with change?
[1] Sven Birkerts, “Into the Electronic Millennium” in
Writing Material (New York: Congman, 2003)
, 63.
[2] Ibid, pg. 64.
[3] Ibid.
[4] Ibid, pg. 66.
[5] Ibid, pg. 73.
[6] Howard Rheingold, “Look Who’s Talking” in
Writing Material (New York: Congman, 2003), pg 380.
[7] Ibid, pg 387.
[8] Birkerts, “Into The Electronic Millennium.” pg 65.
[9] Rheingold, “Look Who’s Talking.” pg 385.
[10] Birkerts, “Into The Electronic Millennium.” pg 70.