Request for help

The Djinn in charge of all deserts and the original camel

The Djinn in charge of all deserts and the original camel (Rudyard Kipling)

I am recording the Just So Stories for Librivox, and I want to make this the most full and complete audio version of the book ever. So, I have included the 13th story, that was in the first US edition, but left out of most later ones (superstition?), and Kipling’s entertaining descriptions of the pictures he provided for the book, as well as the poems that follow each story. Including the picture descriptions means that listeners need access to the pictures, but many may not have the book, or want to look at a book while listening, so I have prepared a booklet with all the pictures. Can you look at it, and give me feedback and criticism that might make it more usable by people listening to an audio book? (The file is here, as PDF.)

Thanks!